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Remember that the words you use in your sdesc and ldesc should be supported by your description, if they are not, your application will be declined. There is a pretty easy algorithm you can follow in description writing that can help you out: The first word (not a) in your sdesc should be the first you describe in their desc, the second is second most important and so on. 

Your full description is a snapshot taken with text of your character.  It should not show action or feelings of any kind.  One should also take in to account that your character will most likely be clothed when others are looking at them.  This should be taken in to account as well.  Avoid describing scars, burns or other interesting features that would likely not be seen every day.  This includes scars on the chest, back, stomach, legs, feet, etc... If you character has a horrible scar on his chest, you should expose that at the time your character removes their shirt through role play.

Here are some examples for descriptions you are welcome to use as a foundation:

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